Essay 2-01: Rewrite of WEB site review: Travel Memory is Treasure

Hi everyone. Long time no see! Did you enjoy your summer vacation? Did you go somewhere with your friends or family or boyfriend or girlfriend? I think some people went somewhere and made great memories. Some people took many beautiful pictures and talked about their memories with big smile. I think travel memory is treasure of your life because you can experience and see many things. If you stay only your home town, you can't see places which has great view.

Today, I would like to introduce my favorite web site. This is JTB travel web site. http://www.jtb.co.jp/kaigai/ I love travel and love to watch pictures of foreign places, so it's good site for me. Actually, I haven't booked these tours using this site, but I want to may be next time! My mother always booked by advertisement. It's one of way to book tours. However, booking by web site is more easier than calling, I think. Here is the another good point. The good point of this web site is that we can book a hotel or day in advance in the web site. You only click the button and decide the dates you want to start traveling. When I see the many beautiful pictures in this web site, I became to go to travel. If you want to travel, just click the button. It's easy to book if you have a time.

Also it has places and profitable tours recommended by JTB. If you don't know which package tour is the best, you click the button and compare the cost or special treatment. Besides, there are some theme "resort with picture", "theme park like Disney land", "travel for students" and "course in a foreign language in a country where it is spoken". They are also good point for traveler because there are many kinds of traveler. So we can choose one tour by our purpose.

If you don't know what should you bring for the travel and how to do a traveler's check or anything you don't know about the travel, the site tell you what to do. The site contains all about travel, so it's very useful for us. I'm planing my traveling now and I want to go Hawaii again with my younger sister because I have a time in my collage life. However, I don't have much money, so I need to make money. It'll be our first abroad travel on our own, so we have to learn how to get air plane and check places, shopping mall and so on using this site. I think I'll be very nervous but it is my now pleasure!

If you want to go somewhere, I reommend you to go Australia or Hawaii because there are lots of Japanese and cute shop! If you were lost, you'll be able to ask anyone. So I think there are good place to spend on your vacation! You're student now, so I think that you'd better to join the tour for student. You can travel more cheaper than adult. I think it' kind for student's wallet! Look at this page. http://www.jtb.co.jp/gakusei/

Make your own plan for traveling and have fun your precious traveling!! Good luck!!
http://www.jtb.co.jp/kaigai/

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